Microfiction Day 74 – “The Catch”

Every time she tried to laugh, the creature in her throat caught it in his hand and pulled it back.

Everyone assumed she had no sense of humour. She developed a reputation for being overly serious. A kill joy. She couldn’t tell them the truth. Who would believe the thing that she herself had never seen?

But she knew he was there. He was the one killing the joy, stealing it from her throat.

The day she started laughing, at her grandmother’s funeral of all places, she knew that he was gone, and that her new reputation was set.


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2 responses to “Microfiction Day 74 – “The Catch””

  1. Ann Thornton avatar
    Ann Thornton

    Ooh. You’re right – the creepier ones make you think. Clever xx

  2. Justin Smith avatar
    Justin Smith

    Heard the ‘pulled it back’ thing! This is excellent!

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